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muertetnr
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PostSubject: Re: Jutsu Suggestions   Jutsu Suggestions - Page 3 EmptySun Sep 08, 2013 1:55 pm

i dont see how this would give residual damage due to breaking the immune system, i would assume it would decrease defenses honestly, but i like it overall.
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Shaydi
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PostSubject: Re: Jutsu Suggestions   Jutsu Suggestions - Page 3 EmptySun Sep 08, 2013 1:57 pm

I'd like to see them Jasee~ I really like the Cloud one so I'm sure the others would be just as great :3

Also, I noticed everyone filling cost with random numbers some very high, others way low. Instead of guessing at how the currency system will work and how to price things, how about seeing the cost as how much of your pools will be used (for now). :3
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PostSubject: Re: Jutsu Suggestions   Jutsu Suggestions - Page 3 EmptySun Sep 08, 2013 2:00 pm

Shaydi actually got a point. I would rate the jutsu cost in low/medium/high until we have more information to work out
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PostSubject: Re: Jutsu Suggestions   Jutsu Suggestions - Page 3 EmptySun Sep 08, 2013 7:15 pm

* Jutsu name: Gold dust storm

*Jutsu type: Village Jutsu

* Opponent will receive residual dmg for the next 3 rounds

*description: User Traps his opponent in a storm of golden dust.

*battle description: [User] creates a storm of golden dust. [Opponent] is trapped in the storm for 3 rounds unable to escape due to it overpowering him.

*Rank it is for: Jounin

*cost: xxxxx
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PostSubject: Re: Jutsu Suggestions   Jutsu Suggestions - Page 3 EmptySun Sep 08, 2013 8:01 pm

You just made a jutsu with residual earlier, try add some diff effect? I like he idea trough, but maybe will look better a bit different
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PostSubject: Re: Jutsu Suggestions   Jutsu Suggestions - Page 3 EmptySun Sep 08, 2013 8:12 pm

* Jutsu name: Acid Rain Dance

*Jutsu type: Village Jutsu

*description: User uses a secret technique summoning the secret rain of the Hidden Rain village, which burns the opponent on impact.

*battle description: [User] does a series of hand signs which brings forth purple clouds to the battlefield. These purple clouds start pouring secret rain which burns [opponents] skin with each drop.

*Rank it is for: Jounin

Keyla Edit: Effects please?~
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PostSubject: Re: Jutsu Suggestions   Jutsu Suggestions - Page 3 EmptyMon Sep 09, 2013 7:07 am

Suggestion:


Note: Not gonna say any cost for now. Need to have few things clear 1st
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PostSubject: Re: Jutsu Suggestions   Jutsu Suggestions - Page 3 EmptyMon Sep 09, 2013 1:10 pm

Name: Inner Enlightment

Attack type: Taijutsu/ Normal

Uses in battle: 2

Element: None
Village: None

Battle description: [User] Closes [gender] eyes and breaths in and out continuously, while paying attention to [gender] environment.
Effects:
Increases User's defence for 4 rounds
Increases User's offence for 2 rounds

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PostSubject: Re: Jutsu Suggestions   Jutsu Suggestions - Page 3 EmptyMon Sep 09, 2013 2:27 pm

May I suggest 2/2? Think 4 is a bit too much

Edit; so you're proposing Like a stance? I'll look better at it when I get on laptop, sorry~


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PostSubject: Re: Jutsu Suggestions   Jutsu Suggestions - Page 3 EmptyMon Sep 09, 2013 2:30 pm

It doesn't deal damage though
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PostSubject: Re: Jutsu Suggestions   Jutsu Suggestions - Page 3 EmptyMon Sep 09, 2013 3:33 pm

i think 4 rounds is okay, though, we should limit that jutsu to 1-2 uses per battle. @agu

@keyla, that sounds more of a ninjutsu description, but i like the idea, also, lets give residual 2 turns.
Also, instead of increasing your str, it should decrease your opponents strength.
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PostSubject: Re: Jutsu Suggestions   Jutsu Suggestions - Page 3 EmptyMon Sep 09, 2013 4:03 pm

It's already 2 rounds trough for what I saw. My concern is it should be more like from 2 to 4 randomly depending of the level or something like that. We can discuss about it

I'll have a look and do the changes on mine
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PostSubject: Re: Jutsu Suggestions   Jutsu Suggestions - Page 3 EmptyMon Sep 09, 2013 4:26 pm

It's 2 rounds already and I think it sounds more like tai xD
Also, I intended for it to be like a self-effect move.
Sorry, can you explain how residual comes in? @_@
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PostSubject: Re: Jutsu Suggestions   Jutsu Suggestions - Page 3 EmptyMon Sep 09, 2013 4:31 pm

that part was for my Jutsu, Agu, not for yours
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PostSubject: Re: Jutsu Suggestions   Jutsu Suggestions - Page 3 EmptyMon Sep 09, 2013 5:08 pm

Oh just realized that, my sincere apologies.
I agree with mue your jutsu does sound like a ninjutsu and it sounds like it should reduce opponent's offence rather than increase user's str. As for the residual, I believe it can last for 1-2 rounds depending on the % of residual damage taken.
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PostSubject: Re: Jutsu Suggestions   Jutsu Suggestions - Page 3 EmptyTue Sep 10, 2013 4:42 am

No o.o. Only forbiddens should have more than 1 round residual. I rather change the description or something when i make more jutsus, was mostly for guideline how to post. the strength buff will stay~
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PostSubject: Re: Jutsu Suggestions   Jutsu Suggestions - Page 3 EmptyFri Sep 13, 2013 6:06 pm

things are looking a little good in here so far! keep up the good work people.
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PostSubject: Re: Jutsu Suggestions   Jutsu Suggestions - Page 3 EmptyWed Oct 02, 2013 3:41 pm

Jutsu name: Soul Crusher

*Jutsu type: Genjutsu/Normal

*description: A normal jutsu used to reduce opponents defense.

*battle description:
[User] performs a quick series of hand signs casting a genjutsu spell forcing [opponent] into an illusion where [opponent] watches helplessly as every one close to [opponent]'s heart gets killed one by one on the battle field.

*effect:
Deals Damage based on you and your opponent's stats.
Opponent's Defenses gets reduced for two rounds.


*Rank it is for: Jounin

*cost ???k


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PostSubject: Re: Jutsu Suggestions   Jutsu Suggestions - Page 3 EmptyWed Oct 02, 2013 3:43 pm

I can't wait to November ^^ Better Techniques should be out the moment we know what the Battle System is like.
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PostSubject: Re: Jutsu Suggestions   Jutsu Suggestions - Page 3 EmptyWed Oct 02, 2013 4:04 pm

I was thinking the same thing
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PostSubject: Re: Jutsu Suggestions   Jutsu Suggestions - Page 3 EmptyWed Oct 02, 2013 4:38 pm

Danke, your jutsu description says it reduces offense yet the effects listed says there's a reduction in defense. Please clarify.
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PostSubject: Re: Jutsu Suggestions   Jutsu Suggestions - Page 3 EmptyWed Oct 02, 2013 7:21 pm

Thanks for pointing that out Loli. I planned on making it an offense boost but watching a close one die can actually increase offense if you think of it in a way xD
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PostSubject: Re: Jutsu Suggestions   Jutsu Suggestions - Page 3 EmptyThu Oct 03, 2013 2:51 am

Indeed. That rage :3
Mp~
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PostSubject: Re: Jutsu Suggestions   Jutsu Suggestions - Page 3 EmptyThu Oct 03, 2013 8:50 am

I see def reduction everywhere o.o

Also, please let's avoid the multi posting, specially when we have an edit button. This page shall be for jutsu creation, comments and edits can be made but not in excess

Thank you~
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